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    xxxneondinoxxx

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    Some Random Poem I Did In English

    Post  xxxneondinoxxx on Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:53 pm

    I Had To Do This In Like 10 Mins at most in english
    its crap


    Cold And Weary Here We Stand
    Fighting In This Muddy Land

    Leaving The Flares and Bursting Shells
    Getting Away This Hell

    Lurching Away Without Any Boots
    Winning a war is no hoot

    Tired and Listless we can't hear
    the bombs of gas of which we fear

    Realizing that there poisnoned Gass
    "Gass" you shour out fast

    Everyone quickly puts on that horrid mask
    except one poor man who's too slow at that task

    The Gas Closes in on us
    i start to loudely cuss

    a man come's rushing up "everything's going to be ok" you lie
    but in you'r heart you know he is going to die

    Now Imagen it was you
    walking behind this wagon too
    watching a man of brown hair and eyes die
    isent' war horrible dont lie

    Imagen Lisening to him drown
    making those horrible sounds
    lung's filling up with blood
    this person caked in mud

    Now If you had seen what i had seen
    when you where a teen
    you would not say it was glarious to die
    for you'r country or queen

    yeh its crap
    and i have a thing about rhyming
    lol!
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    RecipeForDisaster

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    Re: Some Random Poem I Did In English

    Post  RecipeForDisaster on Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:46 pm

    It's really intense. xD I like it a lot. Nice job. (: What a Face

    JustMe.x

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    Re: Some Random Poem I Did In English

    Post  JustMe.x on Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:16 pm

    Its Really Like The Poem Dulce Est Decorum Est :
    Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,
    Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,
    Till on the haunting flares2 we turned our backs
    And towards our distant rest3 began to trudge.
    Men marched asleep. Many had lost their boots
    But limped on, blood-shod. All went lame; all blind;
    Drunk with fatigue; deaf even to the hoots4
    Of tired, outstripped5 Five-Nines6 that dropped behind.

    Gas!7 Gas! Quick, boys! – An ecstasy of fumbling,
    Fitting the clumsy helmets8 just in time;
    But someone still was yelling out and stumbling,
    And flound'ring like a man in fire or lime9 . . .
    Dim, through the misty panes10 and thick green light,
    As under a green sea, I saw him drowning.
    In all my dreams, before my helpless sight,
    He plunges at me, guttering,11 choking, drowning.

    If in some smothering dreams you too could pace
    Behind the wagon that we flung him in,
    And watch the white eyes writhing in his face,
    His hanging face, like a devil's sick of sin;
    If you could hear, at every jolt, the blood
    Come gargling from the froth-corrupted lungs,
    Obscene as cancer, bitter as the cud12
    Of vile, incurable sores on innocent tongues,
    My friend, you would not tell with such high zest13
    To children ardent14 for some desperate glory,
    The old Lie; Dulce et Decorum est
    Pro patria mori.1

    I Did the poem in english. i think its like it because at the start they're in a war and then they are poisened with gas and all but one of them put on their masks. the last verse is all about that mans death. "Dulce et Decorum est " means it is honourable to die for ones country. the poet says this is a lie. the bit is like your last line too.
    have you done this poem before ? were you inspired by it ?
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    Maemi

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    Re: Some Random Poem I Did In English

    Post  Maemi on Sun Dec 21, 2008 6:33 pm

    Haha, that's good!

    The poems I write for English are always done in like ten minutes, then all my classmates are like "OMG THAT WAS GOOD HOWD U DO IT?!?!?!1" and I'm just like thank you lol, I used pencil and paper.

    But these poems are toooooooons better than mine xD

    nothereanymore

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    Re: Some Random Poem I Did In English

    Post  nothereanymore on Mon Dec 29, 2008 1:45 pm

    I just think of poems i got off the internet to help me! lolz

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