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    susannetewksxo

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    Another Day by S

    Post  susannetewksxo on Sat Dec 20, 2008 1:00 pm

    Another day comes, and goes
    Starts and ends the same
    Head over heels in love
    Pretty crazy girl I suppose.

    She looks at you and the smile breaks out
    You make her happy
    You make her laugh
    You mean everything to her, there’s no doubt.

    Her love for you is big
    Bigger than life itself
    She doesn’t know how to show it
    She just wants you to know it.

    What’s she supposed to say?
    I love you is the only thing
    That comes to her mind
    Because she feels it every day.


    [i]This is pretty bad. It's one of my not so great ones hope you like though!
    Loveeee
    -S
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    Meredith
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    Re: Another Day by S

    Post  Meredith on Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:42 pm

    it wasnt bad at all, it was really good!
    if its one of your not so great ones then your other ones must be amazingg! Smile
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    meg_<3

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    Re: Another Day by S

    Post  meg_<3 on Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:00 am

    I like it, its really preaty.....

    what do you think of mine, its not really a "poem", more like a few thoughts put together

    Tapping the pen.Now words coming out.Just thoughts,
    time,memories. Lots of thoughts, no words. My hand
    starts moving like it never has before. Bucket.Purple.
    Who uses the purple bucket?Jill uses the purple bucket
    to get water for Jack. The robe hangs on the door like
    a lifless body on a hook. Just hanging. No one cares,
    no one bothers.No one asks. Hand hurting.Stabbing pain.
    Crazy train.Ozzy Osborne. Crazy man Ozzy Osbrone is.
    Good music.My book is all mine, no one elses. Take it
    everywhere. Write when board,sad, happy, motionless
    lik words from the sea. Fish with scales that pass,
    rainbow colored. Pass with little interest n human flesh.
    Monkey hanging from a tree with little interest in human
    flesh. End of page, stop writting.

    sorry it was so long Wink
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    Re: Another Day by S

    Post  Meredith on Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:25 am

    that was really cool. Smile
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    Re: Another Day by S

    Post  meg_<3 on Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:10 pm

    thanx..... Smile

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