my Uncle's death poem..

ok so tell me pf what you think about this poem i wrote when my uncle died..

Love to You!

I never had the chance to say good bye
I never once said I love you
And now you are far far away
I’ll never get another chance to tell you
How I feel
I am so mad cause you are gone
And now all I wish for is you
We weren’t close but we are still family
And now you lie there with eternal peace
And I am here with a life long pain
I miss you so much I think I’ve gone insane
But now all I can do is talk to you with no response
But I hope you hear the words I say to you, well here goes one last chance
I LOVE YOU!


ok well if you guys like this one i can add more of my stuff. i have alot cause i want to be a writer when i get older..

thats lovely i lost my uncle on monday and its really hard for me to cope with it.